literature

From Within

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Literature Text

The beats get louder,
The shivers are shakier,
Breaths become gasps,
Eyes whip around faster,
Words seem to be blurs across the page,
Tears stain my cheek of red,
Walking is in a straight line with a blood trail following behind
Things just can get to me at times..

Comments and critique are always welcomed
What do you see when you read it? Does it stir up any past events or emotions? Is is to short? Does it flow?
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Paddyeahh's avatar
This makes me feel bad. And I love it.